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Thursday, June 02, 2005

 

So, I begin the workshop tonight, and I've resolved not to bring to the table something I've been honing and tweaking too much . . . both because I hope the workshop will be able to help me resolve problems in poems that have problems, and because I might tear out my own eyes and gibber like Hamlet's father's ghost if I brought something I thought was perfect only to watch it torn to shreds. I'm bringing two poems, although I'm not sure which one I'll hand out. The first is from my ongoing collection of poems based on the paintings of Mark Ryden; the second is from the drunken sailor suite. I reproduce them here for you, o reader, that you might form for me, if it be your wish, my meta-workshop.

Princess Sputnik

Anemones and galaxies--
an entirety of wishes: Watch the eucalyptus
drop its hoary, ancient fruits.

Oh, we know
we're not in Kansas anymore, as if anyone
could forget your easybake

exoskeleton,
your crown of plastic dinosaurs, or set aside
nine months, set aside

the brief history
of time and all the other space-age materials
and then see

if you can indifferently
consider the present rage for balance,
for the harmonious

existence of god
and rocketry, trilobites and honey.
We'll yet discover

the undiscovered
country, the hidden territory, the secret
of the old clock,

the moonstone castle
mystery, and we'll do it presently, as soon
as we've finished

our walk on the surface
of things, mapped the moon, Copernican
frame of this latest

dimension in our endless
collection of oddities, of empties, this nothing,
this space, this final frontier.


(6) Tests of Balance and Hydration

The drunken sailor appears
on the rooftop at night. Flanked

by the cedar water tower,
he looks an unavenging angel,
bedraggled,

his dark dumb eyes glass-fronted
beneath his crew-cut hair.

I stand beside him as he waves
his torso in response
to the pulse of the traffic below,

as it blurs with the too fast tears
of the sentimentally drunk.
His face runs with salt.

We're far from his home. He waves
and he cries, this unbalanced tide.
I stand very still, thinking,

he'll cry an ocean, you know.

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