The workshop last night far exceeded my expectations. People brought a lot of varied but interesting work and it seems to me that people have real projects going on, and a lot of craft, experience, street-smarts, what have you.
I passed out the "Princess Sputnik" poem; one comment was that I needed to slow down the poem with a sprinkling of periods, and lighten up the syntax, which people thought might be a little too complicated for its own good. What say you, gentle reader? (BTW, if you're interested in seeing the painting the poem is based on, here it is).
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